Contents page further work in progress

This is my contents page i have made more progress towards completing it and have received some feedback. I have been told i need to add more picture of other people in order to improve it. I will take that into consideration by attempting to add more picture and make it similar to the Q magazine contents page as seen below.

contents page and double page spread work in progress

work in progress cover page

I have begun working on my real music magazine cover page with the picture i took myself. i did make some changes to the plan i had for example one thing i changed was the background colour from black to smoke gray

This is one of the magazine i am taking inspiration from with the use of puff and cover

Cover page & Contents page work in progress

In today's lesson i began working on my music magazine cover and contents page plan. So far i've completed my front cover and have begun working on my contents page. Currently i believe my cover looks perfect however i may still edit it when i get my own pictures 

i have begun working on my contents page plan. So far it looks good but similar to the cover page i may still make some changes depending on how my photos come out

AS Media magazine presentaion

Magazine proposal presentaion